Edited poem...
Hey all, this is a slightly edited version of my most recent poem. I've still got kinks in this but the random thoughts just had to come through. And commetns, positive or negative, would be much appreciated to help me move this along. Thanks!
"We Know"
Hurt,
She was hurt.
Jaded,
Broke,
Hated.
Tainted,
Tasted,
Twisted.
Hurt,
She was hurt.
Used,
Bent,
Abused,
Spent.
Dying,
Pained,
Writhing,
Died.
Hurt,
She was hurt.
But did she feel?
Did he feel?
People feel,
Oh, do they ever feel.
They pain,
Oh, God, how they pain.
Killed her,
Killed her right there,
Killed in love,
Killed with care,
Killed with heart,
Killed without.
Just look,
Right there,
Killed her,
Just there.
Where,
You know where,
Just there.
She bled,
Oh, did she ever bleed.
Do you bleed red,
Killer's blood?
Do you bleed red,
Murdered blood?
You bleed,
Oh, God, do you ever bleed.
A black bleed,
Oh, did the black blood bleed,
Oh, God, did it bleed.
You live,
Do you know?
She knew life,
Oh, did she ever know.
We think we know,
Where all will go,
From all came,
Where all went,
Where all is,
We know.
She knew Death,
Oh, she knew.
We don't know Death,
Dear God, do they ever know Death.
They know to kill,
Not why,
But how.
They know to live,
Not when,
But now.
They know to die,
Just not how,
But not them,
Not now.
She knew,
Oh, she knew.
Do you?
